Blood stained skies, red. With blotches of purple, like a blood clot on hurt skin...patches of blue, like hope showcases itself in a less intense shade of copper sulphate, streaks of angry orange... the flame displaying its ferocious acts... an even spread of pink, almost making the wide open space feminine... hints of pale green...tranquility among the pleasing harshness of colour, tinges of yellow...blending with, and getting lost in the orange. A sombre sun, half hiding, lazily drifting into the unknown, throwing its last rays out in impeccably straight lines, acting like it has nothing whatsoever to do with the riot of colours dancing in the sky, holding a pair of eyes in awe, a pair of eyes that refuse to look away for any reason, big or small. The trees, the coconut trees, blessed with a green so natural, sway slightly in the breeze, appear black in the hours of twilight. A black that reveals the symmetry of the big leaves, and their patterns, their ends pointing into the open, poking the air with their sway...reaching out for the hues. Birds, big and small, shed all their colour and fly into the horizon in all blackness, their formations flawless, their wings moving in waves, like a lullaby at a distance.
And the eyes still remain fixed, resisting blinks, in an evening reverie, a reverie that got invited to prevail forever, but didn't, looking at something beyond the colour, beyond the festival in the sky, beyond the horizon...lose strands of hair tickle the neck and ears, as if answering some ungiven order of the wind. And the lips, now dry from a continuous half open mouth, in conspiracy with the eyes in admiration, begin to mutter...words flow out in such brilliant coherrence, that interpreting meaning would seem useless, all that mattered was the words, near poetry, poetry without rhyme, a song without a tune, a story without a plot, a play without characters, a voice without varying tones, like a dream on earth...an unwritten destiny pulling the cart of life. And a thousand hapinesses were lived in that moment, a thousand heartbreaks burst out in that single tear. The eyes still remained fixed. Watching the spectacle through a glistening tear that refused to trace its way down the easy path of the cheek. And there it was, a minute of completeness, a balance of emptiness and fullness, a moment of equal clarity and haziness, a tear of joy and sorrow in one, a mixed sense of achievement and loss, a moment of the truth and the fake on par, the bridge between that relished past and the feared, ambiguous future. All in that moment of complete one-ness. Of self acknowledgement. Of a floaty, dreamy truth. Of life itself.
Yours "moments..."ly
Signing off
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Every nightthe horizon lights up
Swirls of pink and orange
Fading to blue and purple
Over the ocean
Or through the sky scrapers
Out on the prairie
Or in an apartment
You can still see a piece
A piece of something
Something never to return
A sunset
For the colors are shimmering
For a moment they stay
Only to disappear into change
Change just as beautiful as the last
This is why ,No matter where you go
One thing remains the same,
A difference in sunsets
In your very own sunset .
longgg comment ;)u remembr d poem? d last line is perfect 4 u na, ur very own sunset.i thnk both of us agreed on it dat day dat sunsets make u all 'reflective' n dat shows thru ur post,it was nice n yeah senti :) n d colors of d sunset woww God's d best artist in d whole wide world ;)
i have a wish, a fantacy-to be there thru it all-the entire process-of watching u see and hear things...and what happens to them inside u, to be inside that very thing that converts what you sense to what u feel abt it, the way it all takes shape in those words,those smiles and those tears...i want to see it all from the start to the end...
sabdy-its a beautiful poem...and a complete one...and the painter of the skies is indeed the best artist in the whole wide world...
divya is god!
Been long since i had 4 comments waiting for me :)
Sandy - Ofcourse i remember it :) It was so nice to read it again. And yeah i still agree with u, abt sunsets making one reflectivem its true! And like they say "The sky is God's painting". Yes, God is the best!
Lavanya - :) I don't even know what to say to that...just that...i dont think anyone else could have said that. *speechless*
Nil - How do i react to such a comment nil? how abt... I'm definitely not God,mister? But seriously nil, i was chattin with u yesterday when i wrote that post, n i wanted u to read it, even though u haven been commentin on any blogs or haven updated yours in long. I didn't want to tell you to... but u did. Thanks :) And welcome back to blogosphere!
nilesh-i double that!
and divya-thats something i really wanna do! and btw u shudve gotten used to being speechless when it comes to me!;-)
lavanya - I am slow at some things. I guess this is one of them ;-)
I really don't know what to comment..the post was beautiful
suk - thanks.
n lav, looks like am not the only one falling short of words here!
Its GOLD Divs ... !!
vinod - wow! thanks :)
i read man...i do visit the blogs..sometimes i don comment..but i do read sometimes..yeah..n wen u write..i try to read somehow..but if its like long..i skip parts...m sorry for that..
nil - Lol, cut it off! sayin sorry n all. Big deal. Am hoping u'll start updating regularly.
i wll update regularly..gotto get the other boys into updatin n stuff...pigs! m a bigger pig though...
Now that was SOMETHING....Beautiful description of the vivid hues...
Sunset is glorious...One awesome painting by the creator, that keeps waning and waxing waning and waxing....Loved this post :)..
nil - yeah saying "update!" on their blogs is definitely not working. Why dont u try your ways?
Nithya - Thanks :) and i think i've said all i have to say abt the sunset in the post. But yeah, its lovely.
ur welcome!and yes ur not the only one!!
suk - :)
divya update???
suk - u're such a darling, i was waiting for u to tell me to update :D now i will!
:D thank u!!and now do it fast!!
yes ma'am!!
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